Kia Ora, In Te Ngahere we did another Summer Learning Journey activity. For this activity we had to write a comment to a person of our choice I chose Anika for this comment we had to write something positive, thoughtful & helpful. Here is what I wrote.
Kia Ora Ashlyn,
My name is Theresa and I am one of the Summer Learning Journal bloggers this year. Great to see you starting off your journey with us.
I just read your comment on someone else’s work. You have done a great job – you complimented and connected with what they had written. It’s important to make a meaningful connection when commenting because it makes the author feel valued and appreciated.
I know that for me personally I am happy to receive feedback that helps me improve my work as long as there’s at least one thing that is kind about what I have done. By the way, the superpower I would love to have the most is the ability to fly. Then I could travel the world for free
Look forward to seeing more of your work soon
Ngā mihi
Theresa